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God
Noob
Posts : 27
Join date : 2009-08-17
| | Subject: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:05 am | |
| Hello every one=)
well alan told me to post my poem here=)so thats what i'm going to do.
hmm,i won with this poem on competition with ppls from all the world.
i won a 1000$ prize,this is a love poem=)
i hope you will like it and if you wont i realy dont care.
ok i will give you the english version and not the hebrew one because i guess No one will understand hebrew...
here the poem:
You're pretty when you laugh,
You're pretty when you smile,
I want you with me,
You're mine & I'm yours.
Let's walk
Hand in hand toward the sunset,
Just Don't leave me.
I love you so much,
You're my Queen.
So let's stay together forever,
Just so you know that you smell like Roses.
When you kiss me,
You look so glamorous.
Let's fly toward the moon together
There we'll dive into the ocean.
I love you with all of my heart.
ok thats it=)
now ill say who i love=):i love you kevin,joe,mike,alan,mandy,trevor,toanyee,tom,lovablle,my guild,my buddy list,and i also love my self,almo ftw.=)ok bye bye=) | |
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Smarticles
Jr Member
Posts : 59
Join date : 2009-08-09
Age : 28
Location : Southern California, US
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:19 am | |
| You don't love me??? Omgod! D:
But then again..I don't really know you, lmfao. xD
Anyways, I like your poem, it's sweet. xP
I love romantic things, lol. XD | |
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iTom
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Posts : 478
Join date : 2009-08-09
Age : 30
Location : Belgium
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:23 am | |
| Wow Almo, that's realy nice, I love you too lols. No but seriously, real nice poem! | |
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PikabuttChan
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Posts : 445
Join date : 2009-08-09
Age : 31
Location : Texas
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:30 am | |
| :O never knew you were so romantic o.O
its pretty | |
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God
Noob
Posts : 27
Join date : 2009-08-17
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:53 am | |
| thx,more thinks plz,i realy wana know what do u thinking. | |
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Ryuujin
Member
Posts : 111
Join date : 2009-08-10
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:10 pm | |
| This is an awesome poem dude :], you have some real good talent  | |
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Kido
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Posts : 176
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Age : 28
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:21 pm | |
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Lovable
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Join date : 2009-08-10
Age : 34
Location : California
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:51 pm | |
| NICE POEM. It's pretty *O* & sweet. Hehe | |
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God
Noob
Posts : 27
Join date : 2009-08-17
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:57 pm | |
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Jinx
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Age : 30
Location : NYC
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niseki
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Posts : 160
Join date : 2009-08-10
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:44 pm | |
| i guess it's good. I'm not much of a romanticist. My reaction to any poem is exactly the same. lol. | |
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Jinx
Senior Member
Posts : 559
Join date : 2009-08-12
Age : 30
Location : NYC
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:49 pm | |
| - niseki wrote:
- i guess it's good. I'm not much of a romanticist. My reaction to any poem is exactly the same. lol.
YOU'RE SO BORING.
not even rhyming poems?! D: | |
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iTom
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Posts : 478
Join date : 2009-08-09
Age : 30
Location : Belgium
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ACDC
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Posts : 195
Join date : 2009-08-19
Age : 28
Location : Belgium
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:36 pm | |
| thats a verry cool poem ; you are good at this  | |
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D3m0nicSoul
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Join date : 2009-08-09
Age : 32
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| Good poem =) I feel loved rofl | |
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xMandyBear
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Join date : 2009-04-17
Age : 31
Location : Edmonton AB (Canada)
| | Subject: Re: Poem|God(almo poem). Sat Aug 29, 2009 4:50 am | |
| Nice poem Almo ! Love you too  hehe . The poem is soo sweet | |
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